单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;请注意分段。
Nowadays many classmates lost confidence in learn English .English is an important subject.English also is a language .Many people speak English. Next I will tell you many way to improve English: Firstly,We can read English newspaper dictionary and book.secondly,we do many English test.Thirstly we can watch English movie. Fourthly we also can song English music and so on.