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my friend is xiaolu ,she is a beacutiful girl.she have a pair big eyes and a small nose.but,she is a small mouth, she look like very cute,she have a salm person.so,it is look like very tall ,she is after hlep with else.when i encounter a lot of suffer ,she is ofter help with me solve it.