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Nowerdays,more and more dishonest things have drawen public's attention,such as poisonous food,credict card cheating...confidence men are around us,preparing to cheat us so as to satisfy their own profit.this phenonmenon make quantitise of people lose trust to strengers,everyone is afraid of being invoved in trick,being hurt,so less and less people are willing to offer their hands to those who really need help. However,as we all konw ,honest is the highest value in our life,we must attach great importance to it ,without which,life can't be as meaningful as it should be.Honest,without doubt ,is not only do good to our healthy growth but also benefit the whole society.If everyone keep honest as his or her faith,there will be more trust,less cheating;more happinsee,less grief,and the chinses dream is not far from us!