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请作者增加学术词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
What's life really mean?With growing up,we hope to gain success and make our dream come true early.So,many of us drink in the work and struggle really hard for making a living. Their answer is to be a superman to save the world. Alringht,working hard is a correct thing.Like many of us, at least long time I have the same idea too. Actually, too much power doesn't mean you can have a happy life. Imagining the situation, when you sit down an office above the Hong Kong convention center.You get what you want, like the power, money and reputation.You don't need pay for the house and taxi. You can enjoy delicious food what you want.However, the pressure of work holds up all your daily and nightly time. Anyone defences from you. you share with these things with no person.You will clear that life doesn't need a loser.At the same time, life doesn't mean we must become so strong. In my opinion, we should spend more time with our family.Thanks for their care and inspiration in our growth road. So do your dear friends,they also listen to you when you feel awkward and lonely and give you valuable advice.
