Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文章层次较为清晰;句式变化较为丰富,但需注意文中个别句子错误;连词使用偏少。
This form is about the education pays,as everybody knows that education plays a more and more important roll in our society,it is reasonable for us that the dates of education pays changed a lot. Now,it is my pleasure to introduce these dates to everybody. First is unemployment rate in 2011,the doctoral is about 2.5 percent,