2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Maoming which is a beautiful city.be located in the guangdong of south,was surrounded with hill,The area have many beautiful spots.For example,the china of NO.1 beach，fangji island,Langman seabroad and so on.firstly,i am going to take you to china of NO.1 beach,because there is my grow of place,there are names of "small xiaWeiYi".secondly,I will take him to fangji islands,there are many traval spot,