2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

At the present,it is a universal phenomenon that a great deal of commodity is excessive packaging. The reason that account for the phenomenon conclude two aspects.On the one hand, businessman look for interests excessively ,because ordinary commodity 's price far lower than these it was packed excessively. On the other hand, many consumers enjoy buying these fine packing in order to contain their face. As far as I am concerned,it will result in waste if businessman still do it .we should hold a healthy consumptive concept,collect these practical commodity rather than these commodity with excessive packaging and expensive.