2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

At the present,it is a universal phenomenon that a great deal of commodity is excessive packaging. The reason that account for the phenomenon conclude two aspects.On the one hand, businessman look for interests excessively ,because ordinary commodity 's price far lower than these it was packed excessively. On the other hand, many consumers enjoy buying these fine packing in order to contain their face. In my point of view,it will result in waste if businessman still do it .we should hold a healthy consumptive concept,collect these practical commodity rather than these commodity with excessive packaging and expensive.