高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,there were many trees around my hometown. There were always much fish playing in the clean river. Of course, the houses were very simple and the streets were narrow. People's life were very tough. Now, You can see many tall buildings in my hometown. Different kinds of cars are galloping in the street. However, the environment is becoming worse with the development of industry. Trees are becoming less and fish are disappearing. The most important target now is to deal with with the pollution.