高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

My hometown I used to live a samll country. There were a beautiful lake run throhgh the country and some fishs can be seen in groups in the small river. Although we life is provety. The building is small and the streent is narrow. but we have fresh air and clean envirmonent. These days, with the rapid development of the economy, pleopl's living is becoming more and more better. more and more buildings have been seen in our country and cars can seen ererywhere. There are no fishs in the river and some tranis are gone. our hometown is faceing serious pollution. there are no clean air and the environment turn bad. It is important to change our's life style and rueduce the polluction to protect our hometown. this is need everyone's effort.