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dear Jone I am glad to hear that you will be coming my hometown,hangzhou . My hometown is so beautiful . I will show you many good places. First I will take you to west lake. Because it is famous for a romantic love story. Hundred years age,xuxian and baisuzhen first meet at here,baicuzhen is not human ,but xuxian and baisuzhen loved each other ,so finally they decided got married. Secondly, I will show you a place that people called it He fang street.there are too much delicious food,like wudalangshaobing. I think that there must become a heaven of us. Jone , I hope you coulde come here soon. Welcome to hangzhou.
