高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

I used to live in a small and beautiful country wtih green forest. There is a river run through the country. the river is so clean that we can see fishs in groups. Due to transporation is lag behind, people in the country who lived in the provety living although they work so hard and wish to improve their live. These days, with the rapid of development of the Chinese economy, our country have also achieved the big development. there are more and more buildings and cars can be seen everyong in the our country. but unfortunately, some trees gone and there are no fishes in the river. the pollution is affected our country. the air no longer fresh and the town no loner green. we should to protect our country's enviroment because this is our lovely hometomn.