高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

My hometown is located in the south of the Yunna province of China. I uesed to live in there whith green trees and clean river. In sundays, you can see some fishes are swimmming in groups in the river. the environment is very good. Although people who lived here is work hard they still live in the proverty. But these days, whth the rapid development of the industry, great changes have taken place in our town. you can seen more and more buildings, super markets and cars can be seen in the street. air pullation is becomeing more and more serious. To our joy, moer and more people relaize that they need to protect enviromnent while they change the nature. if we don't protect the environment we live, we will leave a difficult planet to our chirlden.