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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4614
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

The most of us prefer talking with their friends and classmates to having a talk with their parents, for they can understand each other, they will have the same problem as other students. Some of us would like to talk to our parents, teachers and the elders, who are experienced. We can get some more useful advice. However, a few of us like to solve problems by themselves. They don't like to tell something to others, they don't like to share something with others. What is more, they hardly get along well with others.

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