英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8997
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,many people believe that this is the time depends on people's appearance. But let 's take a new look at this point.It's definitely wrong.There is no denying that we should judge people not by appearance but ability. I insist my view because beautiful appearance only can attract people's attention for one time. Only wisdom as well as quality can make people succeed. For example,the greatest scientist Hawking which got a rare sickness have to sit on wheelchair all his life.He can't live like normal people and he even can't move.He looks just like a mentally disabled boy.But,guess what,he proposed a fantastic physical theory,shocked the whole world. People's ability is not equal to their appearance.So judging people only by their appearance is unfair and unwise.

会员评论0个评论)
小赖的安稳岁月
金币:6

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.0Guoyubiao

人气:84发布:2016-07-02

得分:86.5Recapture_2

人气:45发布:2016-07-29

得分:86.0周昱雯

人气:39发布:2016-08-01

得分:84.5ya00

人气:47发布:2016-04-13

得分:84.5babygaga

人气:57发布:2017-06-09