作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
As we can see in our lives, a thousands of information is reporting and strange things are happening,which including religions,politician,economy.It is unwise that we draw conclusion at first sight when we are listening or seeing. There is needed that think about twice we convey to our ideas and feelings.Someone who is eager to convey their ideas ignore of this information which weather true or false in the internet,like as Wechat and Tencent.According to recent a survey show that many people have this psychological effect.This phenomenon is collected in the youngest people who has shortage experience,another reason is that lots of people has short things and little knowledge of relevant filed.Fortunately,another more than half of people who have realized this importance of the true of information which can affect of people's judge.What's more,those people who have doubted about the truth of information put their ideas and thinking.We should spread this phenomenon and courage to convey idea after think twice.
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