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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11042
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

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Playing football is my favorate sports. I fall in love with the playing football by chance. someday after school on my road to home, I found a fooball in the glasses and nobody want it so I picked it up and carry it to my home. Because I have a football , I oftern call my friends to play football on every weekends. Day after day I found I am more and more interested in playing the amazing sports. In order to imporve our playing football skills, we often training and competition with classmates, through the interesting game, we development deeply friendship and improving our skills. As you know, just like other boys who likes footballs, the English famous football star, Bekehanm is my favorate star. I have wachted his mathces for 6 years. Truth be told, my greatest dream is to be a professional football player. I will try my best to let my dream come true.

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