2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

My friends are Ben who comes from USA.We have known each other for ten years .We frequently talk on the Web.If he arrived in China , i would introduce some areas to him . I want to introduce myhometown to him .There are plenty of fun in my life ,so i wanna share with him .If he felt bored ,maybe i would take him to the pool ,as we can swim here . Next ,My hometown is know for delicious food ,so i wanna take him to eat .