2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

It is not wise at all when you react very quicly as soon as you see sth or list to sth . sometimes we think someone is very stupid for he always keep silent for a long time when it heard sth ,but later we found he is really very wise man .