2012年8月19日托福独立写作真题附范文:汽车和飞机的影响力

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For this statement,I do not think cars have greater effects on society than airplanes.Firstly,as we all know that car is cheaper than an airplane,and many people own cars.And the great number of cars will make pollution to our environment.Secondly,cars are always close to us,there are many cars on the roads,and cars cause trffic jams all the time and countless accidents.Finally I want to say that the sounds from the cars is also a sercious problem,we can not ignore the noise from the cars.