2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

熟练使用了一些长难句；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者词汇量积累需要继续努力，尤其学术词汇还有很大提升空间，另外拼写检查还需加强。

The past years have been witnessing a phenomenon that a large number of people have seriously contaminated the envirenment in public or when they go out for play.As is vividly showed in the cartoon above,when enjoying the beautiful view to the fullest,the two man have throw litter about into the lake.And the fish in lake swim to the surface of the lake ,And even some of them have been dead because of the popullation of the lake. The potential meaning of this profound picture is to make the public realizing their stupid mistakes and call for people to positively take some efficient measures to make up what they have done .Furthermore,human beings should be aware of that significance should be attached to the envirenment .Moreover,it remind people that they should taking the influence of their action in a tour instead of only enjoying their trip or taking it for granted that some innocuous behavior in they eyes may have a ennormous impact. As far as I am concerned,we ought to pay great attention to our behavior in our life ,especially when in public,to avoid damage the environment.As a contemporary colloge student,I have Responsibilities and obligations to do my best to protect the envirenment,starting from me and starting from me.