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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6638
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
评语:

拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者在句法层面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

The past years have been witnessing a phenomenon that a large number of people have seriously contaminated the environment in public or when they go out to play.As is vividly showed in the cartoon above,at the moment that enjoying the beautiful view to the fullest,the two man have thrown litter about into the lake.And the fish in the lake swim to the surface of the lake,and even some of them have been dead because of the pullution of the lake. The potential meaning of this profound picture is to make the public realize their stupid mistakes and call for people to positively take some effective measures to make up what they have done.Furthermore,human beings should be aware of that significance should be attached to the environment.Moreover,it reminds people that they should taking the influence of their action on a tour into account, instead of only enjoying their trip or taking it for granted that some innocuous behavior in their eyes may have an enormous impact on the environment. As far as I am concerned,we ought to pay great attention to our behavior in our life,especially when in public,to avoid damage the environment.As a contemporary collage student,I have responsibilities and obligations to do my best to protect the environment,starting from me and starting from me.

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