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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17597
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Snap judgements can never be trusted? Nothing in the world is so absolute, so it depends on the different situations which we are in. On one hand, I truely believe that snap judgement is not so reliable sometimes. Making a snap judgement means you need to come to a dead resolution within rather short time, which probably hesitate you to neglect the detail information of the situation. You may only take the overall situation into account. Appearantly, at first, those details seem to be lightfeather. But as time passing by, they may lead to vital errors which destroy the whole plan in return. So, when making a decision, especially for the long-term benefits, we never should rush to make a snap judgement. On the other hand, when we are in a hurry or make some little decision, it is acceptable to make a snap judgement. Every day we all need to make plenty of judgements every day. Not every judgement is so vital. So why not just give a snap look and tell your really opinion? It is common sense.

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