2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are pelnty of beautiful and interesting places in China ,and in my mind I think Suzhou is well worth visiting.The water is really clear so that we can see the fishes under the water,besides the air there is fresh which is good to people.However the most attractive part is the building which is known for its unique Chinese style.The garden of Suzhou is the most representative in which there are kinds of birds flying through the trees and it often can attractives visitors' attention.