2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句子错误偏多，建议修改；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误；请注意分段。

don't make decision roughtly we can't difined a thing or people only by what we see or what we lisent,as we all know every thing is complect,the outlook is not always reflect the inner apirit,therfore ,we should experience or acquire more before we make a conclusion.However,in the fact ,almost every one make such mistake,most people make decision without thinking more,they blind to the outlook,on the end ,making large mistake,some loss