安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。
(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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Today I want to tell you something about the Yellow Mountain. The Yellow Mountain is in south An Hui. It has quite a lot of Chinese and international tourists every year, because it's the world natural and cultural heritage, and it's well known place of trip in China. If you want to go there by car, you'll spend about three hours. It's maybe too long time for you, so you can take the train or plane to get there. You can climb the Yellow Mountain to watch a lot of beautiful things, like the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks. You also can see the sunrise. It's very nice. The Yellow Mountain is an interested mountain, if you like going for travel, why don't you go to the Yellow Mountain.