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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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to: KPOHsales@hotmail.com from:hubin@163.com When I was in the exhibation in Newyork from Decemer 15th to 22th,I noticed a new product numbered 5670.I am very interested in this new one.Please send me a price list and instruction .Thank you very much for your coorparation.I hope we could establish business relationship. Best regards. one one one one one
