行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
We have received 3000 products from your company at December 22th. According to our signing of No.35 order,the amounts of the products should be 3500.We haven't received the last 500 products.Please fighure out the amount of the products and send to us as quickly as you can. We are looking forward to your early replay. Wang Haiyang