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句式变化多样；文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；全文结构较为严谨。
People all wish to get happiness，but few can get good results.There are always problems confused us,let us stumbled and almost fell.People don`t know how to get with it, it seems difficult.What i want to say is that happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them. Take Michael Jordan as a example,he is a player with talent.What`s more, he is known for his hard working,he will practise his shoting skills for several hours every day,so that he can shot on any condition and keep his accurity at a high level,that`s why he can win a lot of champion, which means happiness to him,just because he get over the problem,once and for all.You may also know Steve Jobs,he says that the happiness comes from the success which led its apple products make progress,become more perfect and is satisfied with the buyer. There is always a way to get over the problem,don`t falter in it,find your way out and you will get happiness as you want.
