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文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；熟练使用了一些长难句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
People wish to get happiness，but few can get good results.There are always problems which confused us,let us stumbled and almost fell.People don`t know how to get with it,it seems difficult.What I mean is that happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them. Take Michael Jordan as a example,he is a player with talent.What`s more, he is known for his hard working,he will practise his shoting skills for several hours every day,so that he can shot on any condition and keep his accurity at a high level,that`s why he can win a lot of champion, which means happiness to him,just because he get over the problem,once and for all.You may also know Steve Jobs,he says that the happiness comes from the success which led its apple products make progress,become more perfect and is satisfied with the buyer. There is always a way to get over the problem,don`t falter in ,find your way out and you will get happiness as you want.
