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文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
People wish to get happiness，but few can get good results.There are always problems which confused us,let us stumbled and almost fell.People don`t know how to get with it,it seems difficult.What I want to express is that happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them. Take Michael Jordan as a example,he is a player with talent.What`s more, he is known for his hard working,he will practise his shooting skills for several hours every day,so that he can shot on any condition and hold his accuracy at a high level,that`s why he can win a lot of champion,which means happiness to him,just because he get over the problem,once and for all.You may also know Steve Jobs,he says that the happiness comes from the success which led the apple products make progress,become perfect and is satisfied with the buyer. Don`t lose yourself when the problem come,stand up and make yourself clean for your destination,to get happiness.
