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作者词汇基本功很好，一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，不过要注意词汇拼写的检查；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章层次较为清晰。
In recent years, people have witnessed great development in almost all area in their daily life. Large sum of products have manufactured, and as a result, changed the way of our life. Such progress increases the efficiency of our society, while on the opposite side, greatly raises the comsumption of we human activities. Consequently, more and more problem come into being which is very difficlut to cope wtih. For instance, poeple who lives in Beijing and other modern big cities in China can hardly find a nice day with blue sky and fresh air, for excessive industy activities produces to much amount of dust into atomsphere. In some viliges, in southen China, the water should never be used to cook food, for it contains so much poisioness matters. It is not likely to solve such problems as quick as the way people give rise to them. However, more and more people has came to know the consequence of problems caused by their activities. Some of them with insight, began to take effort to correct the mistakes made. In energy field, many new approches like wind power, solar energy are being vastly adoped. Other people, began to use more on environmental frendly products to reduce the pollution. I am optimistic on such problems. On one hand, as long as people keep taking effective measures, existing problem can be solved steadly. On the other hand, with the accumulation of our knowledge, many problem can be prevented in the very begining. I firmly believe that the future would be better and better!
