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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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As the contemporary society progress dramatically, good and bad information have sprung up our life. At the same time,the way to get information are varies.Maybe it's not bad.We can get much more convenient to find the news we need.However, the incorrect information interrupts us. someone will decide some as soon as hearing or seeing. Rather, you can't get an idea immediately by glancing the news or hear something. You should make a decision after thinking twice at less.Even,you can surf on the internet or ask many professional people to prove this information is truth.For example, the clothes are on sale in the supermarket.To win more profit, the seller would increase the price before the sale.We can compare the cloth with others to simply judge whether the seller is lying. Maybe the world is beautiful,the sky is blue,and the land is green.Though,Just like proverbs saying:"Where is person, where is brotherhood. "Cheating is always continuous. Cheated is the normal thing. We need some necessary think to protect our money.

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