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高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:08浏览次数:6606
要求:
文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要,因此提高国民修养势在必行。近日,你班就本话题进行了热烈讨论,请据以下要点给某英文报写一篇120字左右的短文,表明个人观点。
1. 提高国民素质的必要性;  
2. 列举你所观察到的一些不文明行为(两种以上); 
3. 就此做出评论,并提出建议。  
参考词汇:behave  v 举止、行为、表现  spit  vi 吐痰    
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;词汇表达用的较丰富,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

These days, From Media to Wechat, a disscussion about uncivilized behaviors of Chinese tourist in Englind has attracted more and more people to participate it. Among various of comments in this dussicussion, most of people's opinion is that they think we Chinese people whith long history and ancient civilization should be acted as a civilized people no matter what we are in home or abord. unfortunately, uncivilized behaviors can be seen in our daily lives. Such as spitting in the public, talking loudly and jump to queue at the train station or other pulic places are and so on. these bad behaviors no question have a bad affect on Chinese good reputation. the visitors who from foreign country will think we are short of moral education and impolite. In my view, I strongly believe that Form a good habits when we are young is very important. For this reason, to act a well-behaved is very important and urgent thing for children's education. The schools and parents should to pay more attentioin to educate the children don't spit in the public, don't talking loudly in the public and don't jump in queue. Once people knew what is a cilivized behaviors when they are young, they will form a good habits to act a good behaviors.

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