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高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:17浏览次数:4125
要求:
假如你是李华。你的美国笔友  即将随其父母来中国,并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗,请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。
要点如下:
1历史悠久。
2 中国人独有的传统节日。 
3 家庭团圆。
4 共进晚餐。 
5 吃月饼。 
6 赏月。
要求: 
1 词数100左右。
2 可适当添加细节。
3 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

请作者仔细检查词汇的拼写,同时学术词汇量还要多多积累;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mike, I am glad to know that you will be visit Beijing in next mouth wih your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn day in Beijing. Mid-Autumn day is one of most important festives for Chinese people. It falls on Aughst 15th of the chinese lunar year. I like the Mid-Autumn when I very younger because Mid-Autumn is meas family reunion for my family just like others. Mom will parpare rich delicilus supper for family as well as make varity of flavour's mooncakes. among all kinds of mooncakes, ice mooncake is my favorite. After dinner, if the whether is fine, we will go out and to sit together in a vacant place to enjoy bright moonlight, in a Chinese's ancint legend, there is a fairy who name is Change in the moon. she is not only beautiful but also kindness. she bless hunman and help human have a fine life. I like the Mid-Autumn very much. I am sure you will like our traditional festives too. I wish you have a pleasant journey and looking forward to seeing you soon. your sincerely, Helen

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