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Dear Mike, I am glad to know that you will be visit Beijing in next mouth wih your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn day in Beijing. Mid-Autumn day is one of most important festives for Chinese people. It falls on Aughst 15th of the chinese lunar year. I like the Mid-Autumn when I very younger because Mid-Autumn is meas family reunion for my family just like others. Mom will parpare rich delicilus supper for family as well as make varity of flavour's mooncakes. among all kinds of mooncakes, ice mooncake is my favorite. After dinner, if the whether is fine, we will go out and to sit together in a vacant place to enjoy bright moonlight, in a Chinese's ancint legend, there is a fairy who name is Change in the moon. she is not only beautiful but also kindness. she bless hunman and help human have a fine life. I like the Mid-Autumn very much. I am sure you will like our traditional festives too. I wish you have a pleasant journey and looking forward to seeing you soon. your sincerely, Helen