高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear Mike, I am glad to know that you are coing to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. Let me introduce some knowlede for you know The festive better. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the festival-unity. Often ,if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people. I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day. Yours, Li Hua