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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；请注意分段。
A word used to represent the change of the society is development. In the past few years, it was apparent that people had made their contribution in developing our world in a number of aspects, including technology and medicines. However, it was also doubted that the some other areas are still on the way of to become better, such as traffic, environment and preservation of animals. From the dwellings that people are living in to a range of vehicles to the electronic equipments, the advanced technology, that was growing at a unprecedented rate, has becoming an important role in today's life. Not only convenience of technology, humans are also benefited from the modern lifestyle. Moreover, nowadays, a variety of diseases, that were infected from animals or transferred from a long physical distance away, they have been cured by the products from the medical experiments. However, our ancestors had no choice but would die after a painstaking process once they have got the diseases. On the other hand, it is of great concerns that there are still some fields are underdeveloped. As there are soaring number of vehicles on the streets, the traffic congestions has brought even heavy pressure on the roads, and these cars and motorbikes are of dangerous potential to pedestrians' safety. In addition, the waste gas, which is discharged as a result of burning the fuels and oils, can lead to irreversible environmental issues. Last but not least, various types of animals, have become endangered species as the results of hunting without control or the rapid changes of surroundings, environmentally and factitiously. In conclusion, from the examples are put forward above, there is still a long way to go for the sake of the society, although several goals have been achieved though the donations of the pioneers in different fields.
