2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Compared to the old city 50 years ago, it has experienced a large change and achieved an extroadinary level. Advanced technology, convenient transport and life, all fo them are supposed to satisfy the needs of all people. However, beyond our respect, the satisfaction of our citizens don't reach the certain level. From my perspective, the polluted environment is the main culprit.Running a high speed in city construction and development, the government give no concern for the environment. Trees and parks are sacrificed to make room for high-rise buildings. Transport conjestion is contributed by a large amount of cars and vehicles, in which people would be trapped for an hour in rush hour.Additionally, air pollution and noise pollution are inevitablly happen because of vehicles. Apart from that, there are many changes and challenges occurring in the intensely competitive society. Thus, to survive, one need to get strong and well prepare for himself,in order to keep the fast pace of life, which would increase the pressure and anxiety and decrease the satisfaction of the life. To solve the problem, advanced technique in city vegetarian should be directed to improve the natural environment and curve the pollution.Sport exercises should be taken to strenthen the body and keep the shape.Last but not least, it is also essential to take it easy, as relaxation can arouse your happiness and satisfaction. Life is much simplier and unevenful. Keep optimistic and move on, everything will be OK.