作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;请注意分段。
This is an age that we always intake so much information because of the information exploding.In our daily life,there is no denying that it's unwise to jump to a conclusion as soon as we saw or heard somewhat.Just as the saying goes:Look before you leap. First and foremost,we even can't judge whether the information you heard is true or false so that we should demonstrate whether the resource of the information is reliable. Secondly,sometimes the decision you make under the impulse is not what you really want.Admittedly,we will always do something impulsively and we can't restrain our feeling.Last but not least,the fact is always the combination of many different factors.In fact,we should intake many suggestions to find the truth of the matter.And then,it's not late to come to a conclusion at all.
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