2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Xi'an, in the ShanggXi province.The best place I think is The bell tower and the drummer tower suqare where i always hang out when i was a little girl.In the morning when you go to there ,you will see a lot of people doing excercise. The big bell will ring ."ding...ding...ding...".Everybody near the city will know that the morning comes.In the evening ,the drummer sounds "dang...dang...dang".A lot of people go to there take a walk after dinner.Usuallly a family.That's the best time of the day.I really enjoy the time living in my home town.