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My simple and busy day It is really busy day today. I got up at 6:30. I did yoga at roof for a hour. I saw the mountains that was surrounded by fog. The view is very beautiful at morning of yangshuo. After exercise I was reading English article then I made breakfast by myself. It was not great but I like it and I'm lazy.its a joke. The true reason that is my bf who likes it. So everybody knows that love me love my dog. Lol…. Then kept studying while kept checking the wechat . I was expecting the text from Dan. I know it's silly but I can't control myself. I didn't receive the text unitil 12:30. He want to have lunch together. He was waiting for me half and hour. We ate at Tiffany again. During the lunch he kept talking study. It's not boring but it's without love. It's too hot today . After lunch we went to his place. We had a studying conversation . I must tell him my homework that he gave me . I did really bad one. He said its terrible homework and I should do it again. Oh my god. Kill me. When he was talking with his roommates I took a nap. I went swimming at 4:30. My swimming is better than before at beginning I was leaning last month. I caught heavy rain on the way home at 8:00. Took a shower and talk with some friends on the wechat. It has almost 12:00. It's too late to sleep . I'm really tired. Good night everybody.
