2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

复杂句采用很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；部分学术词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Large cities, with better infrastructure, oppotunities to success, and high standard working environment, never fails to attract poeple who has dream on their future. For centries, people from different places goes into those large cities to seek for better living. Some of them eventually leave with wanderful or misrable experience, some of them settle down becomes a citizen. The drawback on living in large cities is apparent like for example, over croweded traffic, bad madical service, continue work pressure, high cost of living. People who lives in large cities gradually feel that the quality of their life is lower and lower.Solution to such problems, lies in two levels, From the micro level, people should maintain a correct view towards life in large cities, try to balance their life and work in terms of schedule. Form marco level, goverment and industry needs to divide the function of large cities in a reasonable way, so as to guide people with different background flow into other places and boost the development of those places. In conclusion, large citie has its advantages as well as drawbacks, the quailty of life remains a subjective view of poeple, it is not necessary to make decisive judgement on whether it becomes better or not.