2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；复杂句采用很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

Large cities, with better infrastructure, opportunities to success, and high standard working environment, never fails to attract people who have dream on their future. For centuries, people from different places goes into those large cities to seek for better living. Some of them eventually leave with wonderful or miserable experience, some of them settle down becomes a citizen. The drawback on living in large cities is apparent like for example, over crowded traffic, bad medical service, continue work pressure, high cost of living. People who lives in large cities gradually feel that the quality of their life is lower and lower.Solution to such problems, lies in two levels, From the micro level, people should maintain a correct view towards life in large cities, try to balance their life and work in terms of schedule. Form marco level, government and industry needs to divide the function of large cities in a reasonable way, so as to guide people with different background flow into other places and boost the development of those places. In conclusion, large cities has its advantages as well as drawbacks, the quality of life remains a subjective view of people, it is not necessary to make judgement on whether it becomes better or not.