小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is a good man.He aleweys to helpe me.He is a boy.He like animale,and love his parants.I like him,because he help me to study.His name is Tom.He study hard,so he study well.I like him.well,he is a good man.He is a good friend.He is a good friend.He is a good friend.