文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重偏高且句子错误有点多;请注意分段。
It is not wise to drow conclusion instantly while you saw what and listen what. Many people usually believe what they see and listen. Ancient proverb said that our eyes are not lying to us.But sometimes we shoud think something under the surface phenomenon which will help us deal with something. Sometime we draw conclusion just because do not want to think
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