拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章层次较为清晰;能够简单运用一些从句;请注意分段。
It is not wise to drow conclusion instantly while you saw what and listen what. Many people usually believe what they see and listen. Ancient proverb said that our eyes are not lying to us.But sometimes we should think something under the surface phenomenon which will help us deal with something. Sometime we draw conclusion just because do not want to think complex things.
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