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It is not wise to drow conclusion instantly while you saw what and listen what. Many people usually believe what they see and listen. Ancient proverb said that our eyes are not lying to us.But sometimes we should think something under the surface phenomenon which will help us deal with something. Sometime we draw conclusion just because we do not want to think complex things.
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