2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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In the contemprorary social.Everyone succeed without a strong will.NO pain ,NO gain.so ,I think a strong will is mostly. However ,From the acient age to persent.How many example has become guild star.Noting a accienter with a strong will. but they are even more than ordinary preson.For example .aiyinsitant contribute in accience and leining in the revolution career. As a student also same to other. Only continent study become an useful person.