小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best good friends, named Lily. We are from the same hometown. She is working at another city which far from my, so we often chat by wechat or QQ or phones. we aslo hange out each other when we go back home town in Spring Festival holidays.She is a lively and kindness girl, help and support her family. thought other people more than herself.