小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is one of my best friends . We are from the same hometown. She works at another city which far from myself, so we often chat by wechat or QQ or phones. we also hanger out each other when we go back home in Spring Festival holidays.She is a lively and kindness girl, help and support her family. thought other people more than herself.